2016届中考英语书面表达总复习教案

要点：星沙英语网 www.rr365.com

(1) 尊敬老师，对人礼貌;

(2) 帮助他人，友善待人;

(3) 遵守交规，过马路走斑马线，不闯红灯;

(4) 保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，不踩草地等;

(5) 补充两句个人观点。

参考词汇：respect(尊敬); be polite to; obey(遵守); traffic rules; zebra crossing(斑马线)

要求：

(1)内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译;

(2)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。

One possible version:

Guilin is now making its effort to become a national civilized city. As students, what should we do?

We must respect our teachers and be polite to others. We should also help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us. Besides, we must obey the traffic rules. When crossing the streets, we should walk on the zebra crossing. And we mustn’t go across the street when the traffic lights are red. What’s more, we should protect our environment. For example, We mustn’t step on the grass and climb trees. Litter mustn’t be thrown everywhere.

Guilin is our hometown. Let’s try our best to make it a civilized city.

(2011四川资阳)

假如你叫李华，是资阳某中学初三学生。你计划于毕业考试后去英格兰旅行。请根据下列提示给你的英格兰笔友写一封信，告诉他你的安排并就相关问题向他询问。

1.考试结束后和父母一起去英格兰旅行;

2.计划在英格兰停留十天;

3.向他询问英格兰的风俗习惯;

4.请他建议去英格兰哪些地方旅行。

注意：

1.信的开头和结尾已替你写好，不计入总词数;

2.词数60左右。

Dear Ben,

How is everything?___________________________________________________________

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I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【写作思路】

一、审题

本篇作文考查体裁为应用文，假如你叫李华，是资阳市某中学初三学生。你计划于毕业考试后去英格兰旅行。信中要包括自己的行程安排;询问风俗习惯和苏格兰的旅游地点。词数60左右。

二、列举写作要点

1.旅游安排;plan

2. 风俗习惯;culture and customs

3. 名胜：places of interest

三、列出关键短语和句型

be away 离开 provide…with 提供… would like to do 想要做某事

【范文】

Dear Ben,

How is everything? I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam. We’d like to be away for about ten days. But I don’t know about England. I hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of England. I would like to travel to exciting places in England. Please introduce some interesting places to me.

Yours.

Li Hua

(2011四川宜宾) 第三节：书面表达。(共1题，计12分)

健康一直是人们关注的问题，我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据以下内容谈谈你的看法。

(1)、保持健康的重要性;

(2)、保持健康的方法：.多吃水果蔬菜;每天锻炼一小时;再睡早起;勤洗手;

(3)、自己的看法(至少一条)。

注意：1.文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名;2. 内容可适当扩展。3. 字数为60—80词;

4. 文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Boys and girls,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you.

One possible version

It is very important for us students to keep healthy.

There are many ways to be healthy. We’d better eat more fruits and vegetables. Take exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustn't drink wine or smoke .They are bad for our health.

【2011•四川南充】第三节 书面表达

假设你是Dale，你的网友Cindy发来邮件，希望你知道你最感谢的人是谁，现在请你给她回邮件，邮件内容包括：

1.他/她的外表、兴趣、爱好和职业等;

2.感谢的理由。

要求：1.短文应包括所有要点，可适当发挥;

2.语句通顺、意思连贯;

3.字数80词左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数内;

Dear Cindy,

Thank you for sending me your photos. You wonder who the person I thank most is. Now let me tell you.

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Best wishes

Dale

One possible version

Dear Cindy,

Thank you for sending me your photos. You wonder who the person I thank most is. Now let me tell you.

My mother is the person who I should thank most. She is an English teacher in a middle school. She is of medium height, and wear a pair of glasses. She likes reading and playing ping-pong. She is a good teacher and she is also a good mother. She is very busy every day. But she tries to do what she can to make me study at school. When I am ill, she often takes me to the hospital and stays with me all the time. But sometimes when she falls ill, she never goes to see a doctor.

For my mother, I'll do my best to be a good child. I'll love her forever.

Best wishes

Dale

【2011•四川广元】第三节：书面表达(满分12分)

地球是我们人类共同的家园。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前，我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以“Save(拯救)our earth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇70词左右的短文参评。

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