2016届中考期中模拟试题英语应用文写作专项复习

In order to protect these animals,I want to be a volunteer。I am active and out-going.I like animals,such as cats,dogs,rabits as well as everything related to animals,like newspapers,magazines and videos.I often take part in the activities of protecing animals.For example, last month I presented a show called Stopping Hunting.Many people came and supported me.

To be a good volunteer,I need to do more,I will read some books about animals.Meanwhile,I will join a club whose aim is to protect animals.

I believe I can do the work well,I hope you can give me the chance.

That's all.Thank you.

【解析】试题分析:这是一篇命题作文，写一封推荐信推荐自己。写作中注意将自己的情况介绍清楚并表达自己参加比赛的意愿。在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性。结合材料可知本文主要是一般现在及将来时态，第一人称。写作中适当使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

考点：应用文写作

点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。

4.

One possible version:

Dear Mike,

How are you recently?

Last Saturday, our teacher took us to Tanggu for a trip by bus. We met at eight in the morning in our school and got there at about ten. We played on the beach and swam in the sea. We saw some beautiful fishes and some wonderful animal shows in the Sea Park. I also bought some gifts with my pocket money for my parents. We stayed in Tanggu for two days and we had a great time there.

What about your weekend?

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析: 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封回信。本题给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

考点：应用文写作

点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。

5.

A charity show

Because of the serious earthquake in Yaan, Sichuan Province on April 20,最新一年 , a lot of houses broke down. Many people lost their lives in the earthquake, and the person survived become homeless.

Next Wednesday, there will be a charity show called Helping the Children in Poor Areas in

our school. The show will be held on the playground froma.m. toa.m. Tickets are ten yuan each. Many students are willing to do some work for the show. I hope all the students can come and support the show.

We will hold the show to raise money for Project Hope and help poor children return to school. I think the world will be better as long as everyone gives a little love.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是写一篇有关一次慈善演出的演讲稿。本题给出的材料较为详细，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。写作中注意从四个方面进行介绍，注意谈谈自己的感受。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文人称时态问题较为复杂，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，适当使用连接词。

考点：应用文写作

点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态;分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组;注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。日常学习中，注意多背诵范文，熟记一些经典句型，考试时就能有所参照，有的放矢。

6.

Lost June 28th.

Fellow students，I lost a basketball on the playground  yesterday afternoon. Who hound it,please keep in touch to me . Many thanks .

Yours

Li lei .

【解析】

试题分析：本题是写一则寻物启事，写作中首先应注意书写的格式，注意启事内容，不能遗漏提示中的要点。熟悉注意叙述的逻辑关系，把启事的内容，要求说清楚。注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。

考点：考察应用文写作

点评：对于应用文首先应该注意格式，然后将短文的主要内容包括注意事项等叙述清楚。书写时，不能随意加以拓展。

7.答案不唯一，符合题意即可。如句子中可补充如下内容：work hard/ work late/ meet people/ talk with people/ write stories/ sing and dance… 文后需加上：Please call Frank at 13634211000.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，题目中已经给出了句子结构，只要根据题意把句子补充完整即可。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。

考点：应用文写作

点评：此类题型首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。

8.

I have a pet dog. Its name is Dong.dong. It’s two. It is friendly and smart. But sometimes it is kind of lazy. It gets up at six twenty and goes to bed at a quarter to nine. It can walk on two legs. It can dance. It can also watch TV with me. When I get home from school, it plays with me. When I am free, I take a walk with my pet dog. We are good friends.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己的宠物狗。题目中给出的材料较为齐全。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。在写作时，本文的主语主要是第三人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时。应该尽量包括文中提示的内容，可稍加拓展。

考点：说明文写作

点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。

9.One possible version:

Ladies and gentlemen,

I'd like to share with you my dream school. The moment you enter this school. You will see a large and beautiful campus with trees and flowers here and there.

In this school, we are living like a big family. Teachers here are kind as parents and  classmates get along well with each other like brothers and sisters. When in class，we are free to choose what we are interested in and are given a lot of time to practice. After class, instead of doing much homework, we can join different kinds of clubs and do whatever sports we like.

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