初三英语作文竞赛试题

That’s all. Thank you.(95 words)

面对谣言

Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first.My name is Li Ming, a student from Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. I heard a rumor of the same kind this year. It is said that a Chinese medicine called Banlangen could kill the flu of H7N9 or some diseases like that. So it was sold out in our city very soon. I thought it was so silly and I didn’t believe it at all. I would rather ask the doctor for advice than buy the medicine.

As students, we should keep calm when we face such rumors. Besides, we shouldn’t believe or spread them.

That’s all. Thank you.(98 words)

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文,写一篇发言稿介绍自己的一次经历,并针对自己的经历提出两点建议。结合本文题材可知,写作中首先要对自己的情况简要介绍,并注意用语的礼貌性,如开头对听众进行问候,结尾表达谢意等.结合材料内容,可知本文时态涉及过去,现在和将来三种时态,注意时态和时间状语的一致问题。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词,注意描述的全面性;语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

3.

Here is my advice:

The right thing to do

1. Listen attentively in class, finish your homework on time.

2. Take part in the physical activity for at least two times a week;

3. Get on well with your classmates;

4. Have a good rest over the weekend;

5. Do something you like;

6. You can read some good books.

Should not be doing

1. Don't quarrel with your parents;

2. On the weekend, don't take too many courses;

3. Don't spend too much time on the Internet, playing video games.

I think you’d better communicate with parents, teachers at ordinary times;

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，以老师的名义给玛丽写一封信,并就她面临的问题提出几点建议。题目中给出的材料较为齐全。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题,注意不要遗漏要点，注意文后要适当提出自己的建议。时态一般应该用一般现在时，祈使句和should句型用的较多。由于本文主要是来提出建议,故叙述中可以借助于序数词.

考点：提纲类作文

点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。

4.

范文：

Most students believe that the life in school is colorful and interesting. However, there are still some students feeling tired of learning both in cities and countries.

Concerning the problem, the reasons are listed below. To begin with, they dislike the way that their teachers show. Besides, there is a lot of homework to do so they are stressed out. In addition, they feel bored about the courses.

From my point of view, students should be focused on study. As the saying goes “Study hard and you will make progress.”

Concerning the problem, the reasons are listed below. To begin with, they dislike the way that their teachers show. Besides, there is a lot of homework to do so they are stressed out. In addition, they feel bored about the courses.

From my point of view, students should be focused on study. As the saying goes “Study hard and you will make progress.”

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。题目中给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应认真阅读要点，根据要点组织材料，确定写作内容。写作中做注意结合自己实际，认真谈谈中学生的厌学原因，这部分重点写，然后谈谈自己对这个问题的看法。注意不要遗漏要点，适当发挥。结合材料可知本文主要是第三人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时。注意情态动词should后面动词用原形。适当使用连词，序数词，注意从句的应用，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

5.

Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a restaurant. We were enjoying ourselves when something disturbing happened. A group of young people were sitting at the table nearby. While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked cigarettes, making the restaurant full of noise and smoke. I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me. Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.

In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion, one should keep quite and not affect others when in public. Therefore it’s completely bad behavior to do that in the restaurant. What’s more, we should always watch our manners and pay attention to public morality, as young people are the future of Tianjin.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较简略，故动笔前要认真阅读材料，根据材料组织内容，适当发挥，不能遗漏要点。写作中注意重点介绍事情的发生经过，并对此评论，表达自己的看法。根据材料内容可知本文在叙述事情经过时，应用一般过去时态。表达观点时，可用一般现在时态或者将来时态。本文人称较为复杂，注意时态语与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

6.

Wang Hong is a friendly girl and has a lot of hobbies. She often helps her parents with the housework. It’s her birthday this Saturday. Many classmates will go to her home for her birthday party. Some of them will ask their parents for some money to buy her gifts. But I don’t think it’s a good idea, because that’ll cost our parents’ money. I’m going to make a birthday card for her by myself. I’m sure she’ll like it.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是花钱为同学买礼物好不好。本题所给材料较为简略，故动笔前一定要认真阅读材料，根据材料内容确定人称，时态等问题。内容上应注意描述的全面性，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态;分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组;注意表达的条理性，用好连接词;为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。

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