初三英语作文竞赛试题

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I am very interested in designing clothes . As we all known , some good cloth can make you look like beautiful . But different people should be wearing different styles

. In my opinion the youth should be wearing light to show he is full of energy and lively.the adult should be wearing the firm in order to show he is a successful man . Finally the old should be wearing the deep color cloth . So if you wear clothes in suitable ways you will become more beautiful

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求写一篇介绍自己对服装设计的看法。本题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，注意从三个方面进行叙述。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态;分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组;注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改，我想一定会写出满意的文章来。

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One possible version:

Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So people use different kinds of music to change moods. If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music. After you listen to it, you will feel relaxed. Some of the students are crazy about computer games and feel over excited, they can listen to country music. After listening to it, they will feel calm and peaceful. Some people feel tired and sleepy, they can listen to rock music. After they listen to it, they will feel excited. Sometimes I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to disco music, after I listen to it, I feel happy again. Music is so wonderful. I like it very much.

【解析】本题要求写一篇音乐的议论文。本题所给材料较为详细，故动笔前先要认真阅读材料，确定写作内容。写作中主要将各种情绪状态及适合的音乐介绍清楚。结合语境可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述，人称问题较为复杂，注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意表达的条理性，用好连接词;为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。

9.略

【解析】试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，谈谈关于假期的问题。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多，注意将提示的要点表达清楚，并发表自己的观点。结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述，人称问题较为复杂，注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，如宾语从句，条件状语从句等。注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性;语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。¬

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Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise. I think it’s good for health and it’s safe. When we walk with our classmates, we can talk about something interesting and know each other better. Also, we can help each other. What’s more，if we walk, our parents don’t have to send us to school. We can learn to look after ourselves. As a result, there will be fewer cars in the city. Then the streets are no longer crowded. I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，写关于走路去上学的短语。本题所给材料较为详细，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。结合材料内容，可知本文主要用第一人称进行叙述，时态主要是一般现在时态。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上，为了让表达更符合逻辑，可以适当使用序数词;语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

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【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文以表格的形式给出了主要写作要点，写作中主要将这些要点表达清楚。根据要求可知本句主要是用现在进行时态进行叙述，人称问题比较复杂，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性;语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

考点：提纲类作文

点评:该题型主要考查学生的语言表达能力，在写作中根据所给提示和语言信息，不遗漏要点，可以适当发挥。做到表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯

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A Wonderful English Party

Hi! My name is Wang Ming. I’m a student of Class One, Grade Seven. Last Friday evening we had an English party, it was wonderful.

At the party, we had a good time. Li Lei sang some songs, Lin Tao danced to disco. Mary performed ballet, and my friend Kangkang performed Chinese Kong Fu. Michael performed magic tricks. My teachers came to our party, too. Mr. Wang sang an English song, and my Chinese teacher recited a Chinese poem. We played the musical Chairs game, too. Everyone was happy.

We had a good time, we enjoyed ourselves very much.

【解析】

试题分析;这是一篇给材料作文，介绍你一次英语聚会。结合所给材料，可知本文主要用一般过去时态进行叙述，人称为单数第一三人称，句子结构主要为系表结构，主谓宾结构，注意运用所给短语。写作中注意叙述顺序，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。文中适当使用代词，注意避免句式的单调重复，避免单词及语法错误。

考点：记述文写作

点评：此类作文考查的是学生基础的写作能力，主要是一些基础句型的应用。平时学习中应注意对于一些常见句型句式的记忆，联系默写此类句型。对于一些比较经典的段落，有目的的进行背诵，考试作为参照。这尤其对于叙述的逻辑问题有很大的帮助。

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One possible version

Reading Makes a Full Man

Reading is very important in our life. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us more intelligent. Besides, reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English.

Textbooks, newspapers, magazines and other kinds of reading materials can help us know more about the outside world and help us grow into an excellent person.

I’m planning to read at least 5 books in the coming holiday. And I’ll spend more time reading every day in my senior high school life. Reading makes a full man! Let’s start reading now.

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